This is pretty good. But you know what would have made it better? Cut Hammy and RJ’s lines in the last panel and just have Phil burp. We saw Phil eat Bob and it’s implied they’re all going to die. This is what happens when the writer and the illustrator are different people.
Or what happens when you write so close to deadline there’s no time to go over roughs.
Over the Hedge: Cartoons hot off the griddle without all that fancy “cooking” you might expect.